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100. Novella. Super short too (15,000 words short). This is a short story. #100Queries
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99. YA Contemporary. Again, nothing new here. Your pitch needs to highlight what’s unique about your manuscript!! #100Queries
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98. Picture Book. Sounds exactly like a combination of 2 books published last year. Way too similar to what’s already in stores. #100Queries
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97. YA Contemporary. Way too much going on in this pitch. Hard to tell what the book actually focuses on. #100Queries
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96. YA Contemporary. Manuscript isn’t finished—just pitching a concept. Don't do this. You should query a complete MS! #100Queries
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95. MG Fantasy. This query is formatted horribly. Weird fonts and colours. The content is all over the place too. #100Queries
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94. YA Contemporary. This pitch actually sounds super racist. Staying far, far away from this one. #100Queries
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TheSmitlyJotter @TheSmitlyJotter
@MsMariaVicente What do you feel accounts for the lack of ingenuity? Plotting issues? Failure to read enough?@TheSmitlyJotter Either ignorant of the market (assume all MG contain the same plot) or just not pitching effectively. #100Queries
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93. YA Historical. Not my type of historical (I'm not super into royalty), but I’m sure other agents will be interested. #100Queries
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Worth mentioning: if you’re planning to illustrate a PB, I definitely want to see a link to your portfolio in the query letter. #100Queries
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92. Picture Book. Doesn’t tell me much about the book, focuses on author bio. #100Queries
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Christopher R Alonso @ChrisRAlonso
@MsMariaVicente Are you just not pulled towards historical fiction in general or is it a specific era or plot details?@ChrisRAlonso I like historical fiction, just wasn't interesting in the plot details. #100Queries
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91. MG Mystery. Not reading anything new here. Queries can get really repetitive. You need yours to stand out! #100Queries
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90. Literary Fiction. Query includes sample chapters (which goes against sub guidelines btw), and the prose isn’t grabbing me. #100Queries
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Maria, Maria 🎶 @msmariavicente
89. YA Contemporary. Goes over the premise, but nothing about what is at stake for the characters. #100QueriesIt's difficult to want to read a book when I don’t know about the conflict. #100Queries
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89. YA Contemporary. Goes over the premise, but nothing about what is at stake for the characters. #100Queries
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88. Literary Fiction. Way too long. Premise sounds like I’ve read it before (which is never a good thing). #100Queries
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87. Nonfiction. The topic is a bit overdone, so I’m going to politely stay away. #100Queries