Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q8: Mystery that I would usually request...but I have something somewhat similar on my list right now. There's always room in the market for similar books, but I don't want to cannibalizing my own clients' sales. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q7: I mentioned in a previous #MSWL that I like creepy old asylums as settings for a novel. This author used to be a nurse at a rest home, which I guess is close enough for her to think I wanted to read her western romance novel. Pass. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q6: military memoir. These are always very tough passes for me, as I'm sure this story is important and meaningful and the author had a tremendous role to play in serving his country - but in terms of mass commercial appeal, I just don't see it. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q5: MG fantasy involving a young prince and a version of a grail quest. Sounds cool...but I really don't do kingdoms, realms, dragons, or anything like that in the fantasy I represent. Pass. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q4: This author listed all of the things I'm hoping to see in a query, then let me know his novel featured none of those things. It's fine if you don't check off every box - no need to highlight it, though. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q3: Horror, Stranger Things as a comp title. Stranger Things is a good comp title - so good, in fact, that I see it in almost half the horror queries I get. Keep using it, but find some others as well. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q2: Apparently I'm listed somewhere as an agent who represents romantic suspense. News to me. I don't mind if suspense has romance, but it's a major element of the novel, I'm not the best fit. #tenqueries

Alec Shane
@alecdshane
Literary Agent
Literary Agent at Writers House, LLC. Wannabe Patriots sportswriter. ashane@writershouse.com
100 MSWL
1 AskAgent
346 Queries
122 Tips

Q1: Historical fiction set in a time period that doesn't overly interest me - The French Revolution,. Pass. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q10. Fiction. Genre unclear. Not enjoying reading so I have given up after a page. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q9. Women's fiction. Writer is nearly there with voice. However, not my type of story. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q8 Thriller. Good premise. Writing needs a lot of attention. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q7 Historical fiction. I like this but not quite enough to want to read more. Characters and voice need work. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q6. Book club fiction. Thus type of story basically sends me to sleep. Hate being so subjective sometimes as the writing is promising. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q5. Non fiction (self help). Don't represent this type of non fiction. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q4 Historical fiction. Very interesting premise but opening chapter didn't hold my interest. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q3 Psychological thriller. Opening chapter doesn't work but there is promise so I need to see more. Full request. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q2 Rom com. Not taken with the premise or set up. R. #tenqueries

Kate Nash
@katenashagent
Literary Agent
Literary agent.
19 MSWL
223 AskAgent
33 Queries
15 Tips

Q1 Women's fiction. Writing promising but just not my kind of story. R. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q10: F. Unique fantasy spin on actual historical events, tight and snappy query, beautiful writing in the sample, answers a call on my MSWL. Partial. #tenqueries #querywin

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q9: Nonfic + MG. Two pitches in one email (no), next to nothing actually within the pitches (no), poor writing, grammar, and punctuation in writing sample (no). Pass. #tenqueries