Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

8:YA alt history. Good letter-personalized, strong summary. Right up my alley, but sample too info-dumpy, not present enough. P #tenqueries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q186 short book of unknown genre. fiction or non? adult or YA? philosophy? writing in Q&A structure. Confused. Pass. #500queries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

7: Adult. Great letter. Historical=good, but set in a commonly-explored period. Intro pages heavy on backstory. Reluctant pass #tenqueries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q185 cyber thriller, conspiracy, villains have weird code names and lingo. not for me. #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q184 WF, relationships, sexual identity. didn't care for the writing. #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q183 women's fiction, personal tragedies, family drama, didn't grab me #500queries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

6: PB. The rhyme feels forced, the language weirdly contorted. Wish it had rhythm and internal rhyme, not a "AABB" structure. P #tenqueries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

5: YA. Letter is ok, but not personalized. Another Grim Reaper story--seen so many of these lately & this one's not for me. P #tenqueries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q182 mystery, upstate NY setting, compelling protagonist. request. #500queries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

4: MG low fantasy. Personalized letter, strong synopsis. Story is unique. Pages read well & want to read more. Partial request! #tenqueries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

3: YA paranormal. Not a great fit for my list & crazy paranormal elements intro'd immediately, before I care abt character. P. #tenqueries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

2: YA. Vampires need heroine's blood. Seen it before-esp sexy mystery man on p2. Need projects that stand out, not blend in. P #tenqueries

Brianne Johnson
@SecretAgentBri
Literary Agent
pottery teacher, Muggle tolerator, Literary Agent @HGLiterary . querymanager.com/BrianneJohnson
10 MSWL
27 AskAgent
31 Queries
3 Tips

1: PB. Not rhymed=good. Barnyard stories usually too quiet & common but this is modern & funny. Humor is too mature, tho. Pass #tenqueries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q181 self-published, not taking those on now #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q180 mystery with love triangle, set in New England. Wanted to love it, and it's not bad, but not quite there for me. Pass. #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q179 mysteries. submission guidelines not properly followed, but writing also too old-fashioned. Pass. #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q178 unsure of genre. set in 70s, washed up musician kind of interesting, but can't tell where it's heading. Uneven. Pass. #500queries

Michelle Richter
@Michrichter1
Literary Agent
@FuseLiterary Senior Agent. Murder=my fave. @PacePublishing alum. @SINCNational member. She/her. Query Manager link: QueryMe.Online/MichelleRichter
51 MSWL
9 AskAgent
1575 Queries
72 Tips

Q177 mystery. Irish-American cop with tainted past, case may have connections to it. Request. #500queries

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#10 fantasy middle grade. Cute hero, but overall not strong writing. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

And here is the original query for international bestselling THE SIREN by @tiffanyreisz = writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/g… #10queriesIn10tweets