Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#4 = contemporary middle grade. Conflict feels too old for MG and word count is very low. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#3 = contemporary young adult. Query describes internal conflict but nothing about external conflict/ story. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#2 = contemporary middle grade. Narrative voice feels silly/ talking down to reader. MG voice is tough! PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Sara Megibow
@SaraMegibow
Literary Agent
she/her Literary Agent at KT Literary. Reading, parenting, table top gaming, baking challah, hiking and wine tasting. Always LGBTQIA+ friendly!
17 MSWL
13 AskAgent
298 Queries
525 Tips

#1 = science fiction. Lots of details but no sense of story/hook/pitch. Query should describe book not just world. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

80. Adult Romance. Another genre I don't represent! #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

79. MG Contemporary. Well-written pitch, just not grabbing me. Always looking for something I've never seen before. New twists. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

78. Adult Horror. Not something I'm looking for. A ton of untargeted queries today. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

77. I don't know what this is, but the entire text is highlighted in bright pink. So blinding I can't even look at the screen. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

76. Novella. Another category that's close to impossible to sell. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

75. Short Stories. I personally love reading these, but they are very hard to sell. Not looking for a collection right now. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

74. MG Fantasy. This one is fun! Fresh premise, sounds right for the age group. Definitely requesting. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

73. Crime Fiction. I don't rep this, so it's an automatic no. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

72. YA Fantasy. Unfortunately it sounds very similar to a number of queries I've read recently. Need to pass. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips
Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

71.YA Contemporary. The title of this manuscript is FANTASTIC! I want to request pages even though I haven't read the pitch yet. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

70. YA Fantasy. There's a time travel element that doesn't like it's for me. Great query though. Subjective pass here. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

69. Picture Book. About a personal story that I'm not sure will have universal appeal. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

68. MG Fantasy. Characters sound too old for MG. Also has a very dystopian description... #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

67. Picture Book. Already self-published, so there's not much I can do. Query agents before self-publishing your work! #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
208 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

66. YA Speculative. It's very dystopian, and as I've discussed earlier this week, dystopian just isn't selling right now. #100Queries