
Literary Agent
Q4: Romantic suspense. Really great concept, but there is a mafia element which is not for me. Pass #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q3: MG fantasy. The idea is good, but the writing is clunky and too much is going on. It is all about the writing. Pass #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q51: Adult fantasy. Might have been interested, but with F, I need more info about a MC to hook me, and this didn't have it. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q2: YA fantasy. The main character is 21, so it isn’t YA. It also sounds like a lot of other manuscripts I get. Pass #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q1: MG steampunk. This is a really hard genre, but the writing is great, it's really creative & comps are fantastic. Request. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q50: Sweet, first-love style romance. I'm looking more for steamy, experienced romance. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q49: While it doesn't sound bad, YA about "bros" is not a good fit for me. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q48: But for real though. PLEASE give us a glimpse of who your MC is in your query. We can't become invested otherwise! #500queries

Literary Agent
Q47: one line query, mass email. No. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q46: A proven weight loss system! How novel! *ba dum tss* #500queries

Literary Agent
Q45: YA C. Not totally sold on how the query is written, but the hook has me interested enough to take a deeper look. Request. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q10: NA. Vampires. Stalker boyfriends. Not interested in any of this. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q44: MG C. A little straightforwardly precious for my taste, I think. Pass. #500queries

Literary Agent
Q9: Counted 10 paragraphs about the author and 3 sentences on the book. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q8: A Fantasy. The world felt rich & compelling, writing lush & accessible, dialogue convincing & realistic. Partial! #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q7: Loads of attachments. "Here's my book! Enjoy." Nope. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q6: YA Fantasy. If I can think of what the ms sounds EXACTLY like before the comp title is mentioned, it's not unique. Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q5: YA contemp. Voice of the query & sample matched, writing style feels fresh AND reminiscent of Morgan Matson. Partial! #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q4: YA sci-fi. Aliens and Chosen One theme. Better suited for a sci-fi agent - there's a fine line between SF and Fantasy! Pass. #tenqueries

Literary Agent
Q3: YA contemp. Edgy content not normally something I'd read anyway. Loaded first line & subsequent dialogue. Pass. #tenqueries


