Literary Agent
Q902 commercial fiction, soapy, plot not original enough. Pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q901 literary(?) fiction. I kept reading the first page, getting nowhere. Pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q900 YA, doesn't sound like YA and is more than 2x as long as it should be at 180k wds. pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q899 cozy mystery, the voice doesn't feel right to me. pass #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q898 thriller, not as thrilling as I want it to be. pass #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q897 psych thriller, not connecting with characters. pass. #1000queries
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Q10: Book of essays about a college student's experiences coming from an evangelical Xtian background. Cool idea, but not for me #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q9: Query letter starts with "Dear Ms. Feinman." We've all done it, but be careful not to get your wires crossed when querying #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q8: Thriller told in the third person present tense. That's really, really hard to pull off, and it isn't quite working here #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q896 suspense, opens w/ 2ndary character, not enough action. pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q7: Letter consists of "Hi!" followed by a generic synopsis and the 1st pages as an attachment. Clearly an email blast. Pass #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q6: Author managed to incorporate lyrics to "Ice Ice Baby" into her query for what she's pitching as an MG "8 Mile". Awesome #tenqueries
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Q5: MG fantasy. I get a lot of these, as I'm looking for boy books, but I'm not a good fit for swords, wizards, and kingdoms #tenqueries
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Q4: Mentions my #MSWL for a thriller w a protag who has a family: "my hero has a family that he's estranged from." So no family #tenqueries
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Q895 pitched as women's fic, sounds more like suspense, feels a bit muddled. pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q3: Haunted house story. LOVE these kind of books, but the writing isn't really there. Pass. #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q2: MG about superheroes. There are so many books that offer a unique twist on superheroes that it's becoming oversaturated.Pass #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q1: Pitched as a thriller, but it's really more romantic suspense. This isn't quite my thing. Pass. #tenqueries
Literary Agent
Q894 short story collection, literary, time-bending, paranormal. Not in my wheelhouse. Pass. #1000queries
Literary Agent
Q893 health-focused cookbook. Not something I rep, but suggested colleague. Pass. #1000queries