#6 = urban fantasy. Plot & characters described in an awkward manner and overall writing not quite strong enough. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

#5 = fantasy middle grade. Voice sounds too young for middle grade and plot feels a bit quiet. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Q401: NA R. idea's not bad, and author has an excellent track record. Request. #500queries

#4 = contemporary romance. great plot but not enough romance. Needs more conflict/ chemistry/emotional complexity. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

#3 = paranormal romance. Great world building and plot but not enough character motivation/ character development. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

#2 = contemporary romance. Great conflict between hero-heroine but writing isn't strong and plot a little weak. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

#1 = contemporary erotica. Great plot but not enough chemistry between hero-heroine and writing isn't spectacular. PASS #10queriesIn10tweets

Q400: Intriguing YA SF, but too dystopian for my list and current trends. #500queries

Q399: How not to write a query: pitch multiple books. Some of which are self-pubbed. #500queries

Q398: Twilight with angels. You have the wrongest of the wrong girls. #500queries

Q397: Too many names introduced in a query pretty much guarantees you won't get requests. Focus on tension, hook, and 1-2 MCs. #500queries

Q396: I will never req a book about a white savior. #500queries #weneeddiversebooks

Q395: Histfic. I don't rep that unless it's really naughty or has aliens or something in it. #500queries

Q394: YA F. Focused on author/what book wasn't. Didn't grab me. Lost opportunity, as I would have req'd if query was better #500queries

Q393: a log line is NOT the first line of your book. Makes me nervous that you don't know how to sell your writing. #500queries

Q392: Romance about a "loss of childhood innocence." Gag. I hate it when sexuality is seen as dirty rather than natural #500queries

Q391: NA R. Bored heroine who is missing something. Mysterious man who is hiding something. Yawn. #500queries

Q390: vampires. No. #500queries

Q730 self-pubbed. Focusing more on unpublished works right now. pass. #1000queries

Q729 WF, a bit too Nicholas Sparks-y for me. pass. #1000queries