Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

85. YA Fantasy. The premise just doesn’t sound like something I’d read. I think I’m particularly picky with fantasy concepts. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

Maria, Maria 🎶 @msmariavicente

84. YA Fantasy. This query is way too long. 3-4 paragraphs max are all you need (this one has 15). #100Queries
Replying to @msmariavicente

The pitch isn’t necessarily bad, but when agents read so many queries day after day, you want to keep it as simple as possible. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

84. YA Fantasy. This query is way too long. 3-4 paragraphs max are all you need (this one has 15). #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

83. Commercial Fiction. Another pitch that focuses on theme instead of plot. Not really sure what the stakes are in this one. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

82. Picture Book. Almost identical premise to a book published last year… #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

81. Picture Book. Pitch is short, but effective. Manuscript (often included with PB submissions) just doesn’t speak to me. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

80. Adult Romance. Another genre I don't represent! #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

79. MG Contemporary. Well-written pitch, just not grabbing me. Always looking for something I've never seen before. New twists. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

78. Adult Horror. Not something I'm looking for. A ton of untargeted queries today. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

77. I don't know what this is, but the entire text is highlighted in bright pink. So blinding I can't even look at the screen. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

76. Novella. Another category that's close to impossible to sell. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

75. Short Stories. I personally love reading these, but they are very hard to sell. Not looking for a collection right now. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

74. MG Fantasy. This one is fun! Fresh premise, sounds right for the age group. Definitely requesting. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

73. Crime Fiction. I don't rep this, so it's an automatic no. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

72. YA Fantasy. Unfortunately it sounds very similar to a number of queries I've read recently. Need to pass. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips
Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

71.YA Contemporary. The title of this manuscript is FANTASTIC! I want to request pages even though I haven't read the pitch yet. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

70. YA Fantasy. There's a time travel element that doesn't like it's for me. Great query though. Subjective pass here. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

69. Picture Book. About a personal story that I'm not sure will have universal appeal. #100Queries

Maria Vicente
@agentvicente
Literary Agent
senior literary agent + advisor @psliterary
195 MSWL
329 AskAgent
330 Queries
107 Tips

68. MG Fantasy. Characters sound too old for MG. Also has a very dystopian description... #100Queries