Michelle Richter

Q10 query is hard to decipher, lacking in punctuation, spacing is really tight. pass. #tenqueries

Q9 magic realism modeled after part of the Bible. Not for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8 mystery, not bad but not compelled to keep reading. pass. #tenqueries

Q7 suspense, story isn't appealing to me. pass #tenqueries

Q6 thriller, not fresh enough, query doesn't entice. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5 women's fiction. didn't connect w/writing style. #tenqueries

Q4 thriller. not thrilling enough. #tenqueries

Q3 upmarket women's fic. Overwritten. #tenqueries

Q2 mystery. not grabbed by story or writing. #tenqueries

Q1 commercial fiction. premise too implausible. #tenqueries

Q10 thriller. Convoluted plot, clunky dialogue, slow opening. Too bad, could have been cool concept. Pass. #tenqueries

Q9 suspense. Synopsis starts in 1st person & analyzes novel instead of just describing the plot. Please don't do this. #tenqueries

Q8 Psych thriller. The dialogue is not good. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7 Women's fic. Good concept, not most original, but fun. But 140k wds, writing way too wordy. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6 is a mass email, not really a query, doesn't have plot summary, greeting, pages, anything it should. #tenqueries

Q5 historical fiction, the writing doesn't fit the period/setting. Pass #tenqueries

Q4 legal thriler. The writing style isn't appealing to me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3 historical fantasy. I don't rep it. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2 thriller, feels cliched. Pass. #tenqueries

Q1 upmarket fiction, plot a bit convoluted and MC's voice doesn't grab me like I'd want it to. Pass. #tenqueries