Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q10 Fiction: Great premise, mediocre writing. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q9 Para Myst: Already a series with same name and premise that’s much better. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q8 Myst: Great premise, good writing, good voice. Full MS request. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q7 YA Sci Fi: I liked this when it was an already existing major motion picture franchise. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q5 ???: No info on genre, no synopsis, misspell my name. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q4 Hist Fic: Good writing but I don’t care about the premise. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 2d

Q3 Urb Fan/Detective: Reads like 1st draft. Lots of info dump. Pass. #tenqueries

Abby Saul @BookySaul · 3d

It's always a #querywin when I am desperate to read more: the polished query has really deliberately sold the book to me!

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q10: A SF: Trope-y opening. Writing needs editing (specifically the dialogue). PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q9: YA F: Query is entirely about vague conflict. Word count is way too short. PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q8: A/F: Cool concept, decent writing, but it leans toward the darker side of fantasy (too dark for me). PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q7: YA/A R? Contemporary: Not for me, but I think another CLA agent might enjoy! Passing it on to them :) #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q6: A HF: Cool spin on time-old tale. LOVE! Pages had a little too much telling vs. showing. PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q5: YA Thriller: Cute opening line. But pages become too info-dumpy. PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q4: YA UF: Pastoral setting heavily involved in manuscript. Word count is on shorter side. PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q3: A Thriller: About a topic I’m not super crazy about. Pages were just OK. PASS #tenqueries

Meg LaTorre-Snyder📚 @MegLaTorre · 4d

Q2: A Thriller: Query is short (not enough info about book), writing needs additional editing. PASS #tenqueries