Peter Knapp
@petejknapp
Literary Agent
Lit agent with @parkandfine representing kid lit with enthusiasm! petejknapp.com
290 MSWL
118 AskAgent
228 Queries
5 Tips

Q1: Adult/thriller. Pass. Protag felt overly familiar and voice is a bit too detached/report-like. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Thanks for joining me for the #tenqueries. Hope it was useful.

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q10: Romance. I am looking for romance, but not inspirational romance. Sounds good, but not for me. Pass #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q9: Humor/WF. Decent query, great idea. My gut tells me it could be amazing and it did make me laugh. Request. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q8: Literary fiction. It sounds a little too literary/great american novel for me. I am usually not the right person for these #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q7: Upmarket fiction. Has already been self published, doesn't include any sales numbers. Pass. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q6: Historical fiction. This query has 8 mispelled words. One or two typos is okay, but this is too many. Pass. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q5: Women's fiction. Looking at this story, this query should be funny, but it isn't. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q4: Contemporary MG. So funny, great comp, and the story is really creative. Request & will look at pages immediately #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q3: Historical fiction. Set in a point of history we don't often see, but I have no idea what the book is about. Pass. #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q2: Adult mystery. Intriguing idea, but then the query includes the character's voice in the query and it is generic. Pass #tenqueries

Caitie Flum
@caitief
Literary Agent
Associate agent at Liza Dawson Associates. Thoughts are my own. Huge nerd, musical theater lover
79 MSWL
49 AskAgent
62 Queries
27 Tips

Q1: Paranormal romance. I don't represent paranormal, so this one is an easy rejection. Please look at what I rep! #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q10: A Hist fic (potentially YA?). Neat time period, but MC's circumstances are too woe-is-me. Needs a positive drive, too. Pass #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q9: ? Comp titles incl MG, YA, & A, from fantasy to contemporary to historical fiction to horror. Who would I sell this to? Pass #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q8: Fantasy. Preachy (what I'd learn from the ms, philosophy behind the ms, etc). More about the author than the book. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q7: A. Gothic elements. Contemporary but with that 19th century feel, a la Donna Tartt. Requested sample. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q6: YA Fantasy. SO CLOSE with the premise, then the driving magical element kicked in. Not original. A sad pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q5: NA Fantasy. Again, don't represent NA. Fantasy element didn't stand out enough for me to send to another agent here. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q4: YA Fantasy. A la WINNER'S CURSE, ancient France. Intriguing MC. Requested sample. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett
@LECrockett
Literary Agent
Literary Agent @TriadaUS | Opinions my own | she/her
148 MSWL
24 AskAgent
322 Queries
88 Tips

Q3: NA Sci-fi. I don't represent NA, but the SF aspects weren't original enough for me to pass on to another agent here. Pass. #tenqueries