Q2: I'm sure that this is a very good New Adult romance...but I don't know why you sent it to me.

Q1: Exclamation points everywhere. I would actually have no problem with the exclamation point being made illegal and carry with it jailtime

Q10: MG fantasy. No introduction or query letter :( Pass. #tenqueries

Q9: MG fantasy(?). The query is a little vague; I'm not clear on the premise. Pass. #tenqueries

Q8: MG fantasy. The premise isn't for me. Didn't get caught up in the pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Sample pages sent as an attachment :( We don't open attachments unless requested. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: No sample pages :( Please be sure to follow submission guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA sci-fi. The premise seems a bit too familiar. Didn't get caught up in the sample pages. Pass. #tenqueries

Q4: MG fantasy. Premise isn't for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: YA fantasy. The premise feels too familiar. And the POV changes a lot, so it was difficult to connect w/characters. Pass. #tenqueries

Q2: Historical Romance. I like the premise, but the pages just seemed to move too fast. Didn't get drawn into the story. Pass #tenqueries

Q1: MG fantasy. The premise isn't for me. Pass #tenqueries

Q10: A "true" story sold a SF because it's too crazy to be believed. Query is also thousands of words long. Crackpot vibes. Pass #tenqueries

Q9: Supernatural NA. Has romance, but focuses on some really interesting issues of internal/external identity. Req partial #tenqueries

Q8: YA. Lots of typos and plot is confusing. Pass. #tenqueries

Q7: Supernatural YA rom. A little didactic and doesn't have much other plot. Pass. #tenqueries

Q6: 170K High F. Gives me oveview, but no characters so no reason to care and distinguish it from other epic fantasy. Pass. #tenqueries

Q5: YA SF. I'm waffling. Seems like the best version of a common story, but there are so many other queries I love more, so pass #tenqueries

Q4: F YA, but a bit too short and doesn't quite grab me. Pass. #tenqueries

Q3: Premise is excellent, but the query itself is confusing, Most likely the prose won't be clear or readable. Pass. #tenqueries