Jordy Albert ♻️🌎☮️ @bluedragonfly81 · 5d

Q10: YA. First chapter was more like a prologue...not sure if it's really needed. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q10 YA: Not bad but starts in wrong place and we don’t meet protag in first chapter. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q8 Fant: Good, just not great and not a fresh take. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q7 Wom Fic: A lot of info dump. Starts in wrong place and at 114k is too long. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q6 Rom Susp: 225K is way too long. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q4 Rom: Too old fashioned and not in a good way. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q2 LGBT Fic: Too scatological for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q1 Fic: 2 grammatical errors in first paragraph. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q10: Suspense. Not for me, but also had INTERESTING use of CAPS randomly PLACED throughout + didn't follow sub guidelines. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q8: Queried all of Triada (no). Was more interested in sharing a board game version of the novel than the novel (no). Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q7: Fantasy. Not sure if author is pretending to be the character or...? Unprofessional. Poor writing for target audience. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q6: Psychological thriller. Nothing about this is for me. Look at the other Triada agents. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q4: WF. A cut-and-paste, only-the-names-changed version of Forman's LEAVE ME. Comp titles OK, near plagiarism isn't. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q3: YA Contemp. Solid premise, diversity excellent, but the writing sample needed a lot of TLC, edits, and polishing. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q2: F. Angry girl assassin assigned to protect prince she means to kill. How will this stand out in sea of similar plots? Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Crockett @LECrockett · 1w

Q1: YA. Contemporary or urban fantasy or sci fi? Not sure, and the premise doesn't seem quite sure what aims to be either. Pass. #tenqueries

Jordy Albert ♻️🌎☮️ @bluedragonfly81 · 1w

Q9: MG. Some editing needed, and the dialogue felt a little inauthentic. Pass. #tenqueries .

Jordy Albert ♻️🌎☮️ @bluedragonfly81 · 1w

Q8: MG. Pages begin with a bit too much dialogue. There was action that happens that was difficult to believe. Pass. #tenqueries