Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q10 Myst: Gives away too much too early. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q9 YA: several grammar mistakes in first few paragraphs. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q8 Mystery: Admit they sent the first draft. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q6 Sci Fi: 120K too high and I just couldn’t connect. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q5 Mag Real: Great premise but the writing was disappointing. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q3 MG: Good premise but the writing didn’t work for me. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 3d

Q2 Thriller: Info dump. Also, Dear Sir or Ma’am??!?! #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 1w

Q10 YA: Nice voice but starts in wrong place and pacing too slow. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 1w

Q8 YA Urb Fant: Nice voice but pacing just too slow. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 1w

Q6 LGBT: Too much expeditionary (?) narrative. Waiting for writer to get to the point. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 1w

Q3 5 different genres?: Over 200K words. No. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 1w

Q1 YA: This is another version of an already existing Disney movie. Pass. #tenqueries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 1w

Q10: PB. I have seen good work from this author before, but waiting on the right project to click fully. Pass. #tenqueries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 1w

Q4: The voice is off. It reads much older than it should for the character's age. Pass YA Fantasy #tenqueries