Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q10 Myst: No synopsis. I detect a trend. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q8 YA: Great premise, all info dump. Needs many rewrites. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q7 Thriller: Not engaging and 150K is too long. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q6 Rom: Unnecessary prologue that gives everything away. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q5 Fant: Not interesting enough to read 129K words. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q3 Lit Fic: All dialogue, no substance. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q1 YA: Concept’s been done to death and much better. Pass. #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q10 YA: Didn’t follow guidelines. No information about the book. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q9 Romance: No hook. Not sure what the story is about. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q8 Thriller: Good start in the query, but the first pages didn’t hold up. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q7 Fantasy: Short for this genre. Info dump. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q6 Paranormal: Dear Publisher. Not for me. Info dump. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q5 Thriller: Hello. What kind of introduction is that? Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q4 Genre? To whom it may concern. No details about the book. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q3 Mystery: Dear Publisher. Way too long. Pass #tenqueries

Misty Williams @misty_williams_ · 2w

Q2 YA Fantasy: Not for me. Didn’t hook or interest me. Pass #tenqueries

Alyssa Jennette @AlyssaJennette · 2w

Q10: YA. Intriguing, but introduces a LOT of concepts with no clear explanation for how they all fit together. I'm bummed but--Pass.

Alyssa Jennette @AlyssaJennette · 2w

Q9: Thriller. Looking a little derivative, and I'm not in love with the writing. Pass.