Cate Hart @CateHart · 4w

Q1) something I do not represent. Automatic pass. Be sure you read agent profiles and know what they are looking for.

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q10 Lit FIc: I just don’t get it. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q9 Susp: All tell and info dump. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q8 YA Fant: Too much info dump. Needs another draft. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q7 YA Sci Fi: Great premise but the writing didn’t wow me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q6 Myst: Too much like a major book/film success that already exists. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q5 YA Sci Fi: Too much like an already successful series that became a TV series. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q4 Rom Susp: Good writing but too much tell. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q3 Hist Rom: Great premise, great writing. Full MS request. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q2 YALGBT: Great premise but the writing didn’t work for me. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 14

Q1 Myst: Decent writing but too narrative heavy. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q9 YA: Great premise, writing not there. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q8 YA: Protag is an unlikeable brat. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q7 Fant: Translated from another language. Very stiff. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q6 Wom Fic: Interesting premise but all tell. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q5 YA SciFi: Not even 20K words. NO NOVELLAS. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q4 Myst: Not bad writing, just nothing to get excited about. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q3 Sci Fi: Bad premise, worse dialogue. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · Nov 9

Q2 Para Rom: Bad punctuation and grammar in first sentence. Pass. #tenqueries