Laura Zats @LZats · 6d

Q465: A vague query filled with cliches helps no one. Remember that. #500queries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q10 Sci Fi: 175K words is too long. For anything. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q9 Thriller: Interesting concept but all info dump. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q8 YA Fant: Secondary character is far more interesting than the protag. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q7 Humor: Still haven’t found any humor submission to be funny. The streak continues. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q6 Hist Rom: Don’t like premise. Dialogue too modern. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q5 Myst: Good premise, not enough tension. Too lighthearted. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Zats @LZats · 6d

Q464: Both query and book are WAYYYY too long. Pass. #500queries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q3 Rom Susp: Good premise, boring voice. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q2 YA: I really dislike the protag. A lot. Pass. #tenqueries

Eric Ruben @TheEricRuben · 6d

Q1 Fant: Swaps tenses several times in the 1st paragraph. Pass. #tenqueries

Laura Zats @LZats · 6d

Q462: YA. Voice is way too young. Pass. #500queries

Laura Zats @LZats · 6d

Q461: SF MG. Good idea, but not enough heart here. Pass. #500queries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 6d

Q10: Eh. This is odd and I'm not super interested in the concept. Picture book pass. #tenqueries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 6d

Q9: This is cute, but I'm not feeling it. Picture book pass. #tenqueries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 1w

Q7: Nope. I don't like the tone of this query. You may think you're joking, but it came off condescending. Hard pass. #tenqueries

Natascha Morris @SoCalledYALife · 1w

Q6: Picture book that feels more like a novelty book and not one I would want to re-read, so pass. #tenqueries